Persuasive Writing - Why me and my partner deserve the reward?
Each group will publish their work (after Mr. Martens has marked it) and the winners will be picked by a combination of a online poll and Mr.
Martens marking. The reward is a 30min block of free time at Mr. Martens choosing.
The marking schedule (below right) was given to each of the groups at the beginning. This helped developed our success criteria.
We will know we have been successful when we
1. use a range of persuasive strategies
2. write in paragraphs not bullet points
3. have a clear introduction, main part, conclusion
Martens marking. The reward is a 30min block of free time at Mr. Martens choosing.
The marking schedule (below right) was given to each of the groups at the beginning. This helped developed our success criteria.
We will know we have been successful when we
1. use a range of persuasive strategies
2. write in paragraphs not bullet points
3. have a clear introduction, main part, conclusion
Tim, Taylah and Nathan
We are trying to argue that Taylah, Nathan and I should deserve the 30 minutes free time reward
Reason one we respect others. We always listen to others opinions even if we don’t agree we still acknowledge them. We respect people’s beliefs and what they do differently to us. We always respect others things by not destroying their things.
Reason two is sportsmanship. We always help people if they are hurt and we get them to the end of the race or Competition. We cheer people on until they have reached the end of the race or the competition and we never give up when we are coming last we always complete the race or the competition. As Valarie Adams said “never give up”.
Reason three we work together well. we help each other complete work by giving each other ideas or clues to the answer of question. We also help each other with spelling by testing them on their words and if they get them wrong we help them learn them we do this at least 25 times a year. We also help each other find things that we need or to work with.
Nathan taylah and I think we deserve the 30 minute free time reward After reading this do you think we deserve it.
Reason one we respect others. We always listen to others opinions even if we don’t agree we still acknowledge them. We respect people’s beliefs and what they do differently to us. We always respect others things by not destroying their things.
Reason two is sportsmanship. We always help people if they are hurt and we get them to the end of the race or Competition. We cheer people on until they have reached the end of the race or the competition and we never give up when we are coming last we always complete the race or the competition. As Valarie Adams said “never give up”.
Reason three we work together well. we help each other complete work by giving each other ideas or clues to the answer of question. We also help each other with spelling by testing them on their words and if they get them wrong we help them learn them we do this at least 25 times a year. We also help each other find things that we need or to work with.
Nathan taylah and I think we deserve the 30 minute free time reward After reading this do you think we deserve it.
Ella and Bradley
Why me and my partner deserve the reward.
We deserve the reward because we are trustworthy and you give us
responsibilities.
Firstly Ella is your personal assistant and you trust both of us. You
said you can't remember how many times that you have trusted us to do
important jobs for you. We sometimes stay in at morning tea and lunch
times to help you with jobs.
We are also sporty. We enjoy joining in with sport in the afternoon
like touch and dodgeball in the hall and on the tiger turf. And we
also play fair and stick to the rules you make.
We even finish our work on time and most of it is to a high standard
and we also hand our homework in on time. We always give 110% effort
in all our things we do. We also think outside the box and we do the
right thing (sometimes). And we like to attempt new things.
So I hope we have convinced you that we should deserve the reward.
We deserve the reward because we are trustworthy and you give us
responsibilities.
Firstly Ella is your personal assistant and you trust both of us. You
said you can't remember how many times that you have trusted us to do
important jobs for you. We sometimes stay in at morning tea and lunch
times to help you with jobs.
We are also sporty. We enjoy joining in with sport in the afternoon
like touch and dodgeball in the hall and on the tiger turf. And we
also play fair and stick to the rules you make.
We even finish our work on time and most of it is to a high standard
and we also hand our homework in on time. We always give 110% effort
in all our things we do. We also think outside the box and we do the
right thing (sometimes). And we like to attempt new things.
So I hope we have convinced you that we should deserve the reward.
Ben and Zane
why Ben and Zane should get the reward
Ben and Zane are the best people in room one because,We claim that we are
well behaved because we are well focused even when Tom is an idiot.
We usually get 100 out of 100 in our maths grids we want the prize
very much and we would respect it very much if you give it to us.
We have to much energy from our diet what is %95 sugar so we need more
free time to burn off our energy.New Zealand steel says we are alright
at sports.
So we are the best people in room 1 it's your choice
Ben and Zane are the best people in room one because,We claim that we are
well behaved because we are well focused even when Tom is an idiot.
We usually get 100 out of 100 in our maths grids we want the prize
very much and we would respect it very much if you give it to us.
We have to much energy from our diet what is %95 sugar so we need more
free time to burn off our energy.New Zealand steel says we are alright
at sports.
So we are the best people in room 1 it's your choice
Brandon and Billy
We are trying to convince you to convince you to give us reward so
listen closely.
We have sportsmanship where ever when ever rain or shine.we
congratulate the winner if we lose,we our hardest in every thing even
if we don't win.we don't throw tantrums.
We work with anybody even if we don't like them.we are always honest
because when we cheat we don't lie about it for example cross country
it was so close but Brandon told the truth.
We are well behaved.we share with people,we care about people.we have
character,kindness and courtesy in our hearts at all times.we respect
people what ever their age what ever there culture.
Now you know how great we are will you vote for us now at
listen closely.
We have sportsmanship where ever when ever rain or shine.we
congratulate the winner if we lose,we our hardest in every thing even
if we don't win.we don't throw tantrums.
We work with anybody even if we don't like them.we are always honest
because when we cheat we don't lie about it for example cross country
it was so close but Brandon told the truth.
We are well behaved.we share with people,we care about people.we have
character,kindness and courtesy in our hearts at all times.we respect
people what ever their age what ever there culture.
Now you know how great we are will you vote for us now at